Do u like the color Green? check out this poem i wrote.?

"The color Green"



Green

Green is the beginning of life.

Green is the smell of nature.

Green is the days of spring after winter.

Green is smell of life in the air.

Green is the taste of green apples.

Green is the feeling you get when you see your dead plant back alive again.

Green is the sound of plants drinking the rain.

Green is the feeling of raindrops on you face.

Green is the smell of the ground after it rained.

Green is the sound of frogs in a pond.

Green is the sound of trees whispering with the wind.

Green is the sound of echoes of water you hear in the forest.

Green is the sound of the rain dropping on plants.

Green is the smell of fresh mowed grass.

Green is the taste of a cold mountain dew on a hot day.

Green is the color of Irish day.

Green is the color of Christmas when mixed with red.

Green is the sound of the bells at Christmas Eve.

Green is the smell of Christmas trees.

Green is the taste of green peppermint candy canes.

Green is a day at the park.

Do u like the color Green? check out this poem i wrote.?
I must say that it is real good stuff. You have got an excellent thought process with amazin flow of ideas. You might turn out to be emily dickinison of tommorrow... all the best girl!
Reply:I guess green is an okay color. I also agree that green has a particular smell.
Reply:dear, greenmaniac

add another line ,green is the colour of chlorophyll.

looking at the green can relax your eyes.
Reply:Envy and broccoli have made an alliance

Absinthe and traffic lights

Lentils and electric cars

St. Patrick and geckos

Jade

and

Juleps.



Green and green

and green

is

green.
Reply:I know this may seem redundant, but it's too repetitive. The imagery is great and the mechanics are fine but the presentation is simply boring. I like it but think of doing something besides "green is...green is....green is....". This is not a poem yet but I see great potential for one.
Reply:Green is my favorite color. This poem reflects many aspects of green.

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