Please read this???...?

"The Christmas Gift"



We been writing for the last couple of months

you call me baby

and I call you sweetie

christmas is near

you tell me that you cant make it

because your poor

Its okey baby we are all poor I tell you

As Christmas day came no letter was in my box

I was sadden by this despair

I was looking out my window and saw one snowflake fall

on the cold harden ground

Suddenly I hear my door bell ring

Who can it be I ask myself?

I get this feeling in my gut that it might be you

Calmly I go answer the door

to my surprise there you stand

with a grin on your goregous face

you grab me with such passion

and tell me that you love me

our kiss is so bitter sweet

Angels threw sparks that cold night

all around us

as the night goes on we stare at each other in disbelif

not realizing that we both had this same christmas gift.



Hope you'll like it. Enjoy = ]

Please read this???...?
It's cute.
Reply:sounds like my kind of christmas
Reply:It's okay....there's something missing...something where I can't get the full emotional effect of the poem. I'd not sure what it is though....oh well.
Reply:Nice!
Reply:good poetry



sounds like you have a kick as well!
Reply:what a beautiful poem.
Reply:Lovely Christmas Dream!
Reply:it was really beautiful.it seems that you like poetry ,I like it too. I want to be a writer.