I have a poem about christmas and want to know if it is any good?

It was a cold saterday night.The day was special only one away from christmas eve.The streets were shining brightly and oh so merily.The carolers were singing.The church bells were ringing.Last minute shoppers were hurrying.I watched eager.Meager people noticed me.Then I went to bed thoughts in my head waiting for the sound of his sleigh coming my way.

I have a poem about christmas and want to know if it is any good?
Its great its like a mix of Allen Poe, Night Before X-mas, Know what i mean? Its cool.
Reply:I think this person was being sarcastic. Report It
Reply:CHECK SPELLING, AND NO IT DOSENT MAKE SENSE!
Reply:It was OK, for a first time.
Reply:Are you two? Because if you are, it's brilliant!! And to the girl above, post your own question!
Reply:no offense but it sucks....you might wanna think about another hobby
Reply:Change I watched eager to I watched eagerly. Aside from that, great poem =)
Reply:Good? Good? I think is is great! Also very cute!
Reply:Christmasey.
Reply:that was so cute..i liked it...keep them coming ,,
Reply:you go to bed the day before christmas eve and wait to hear sleigh bells? no, you go to bed ON christmas eve and wait...



that and spelling, and the meager people noticing you is creepy, but a poem can be creepy, but now i'm rambling... so sorry but my vote is that your poem is not good.
Reply:it's nice, but you might want to run a spellchecker on it :)
Reply:Lame
Reply:These people are being overly nice trying to get 10 points.

Your poem wasn't very good you used lines from other poems and you where trying to hard to make rhyme you need to focus more on the flow of the words and just take your time. Don't let this stop you from trying you have talent just keeping working on it.
Reply:cute!!
Reply:Very sweet. Reflects the holiday well, but, check spelling please!
Reply:I've got one too what do you think,



Christmas



Cold weather outside

Birds fly south to hide

Leaves turn yellow

Nights so mellow



Presents under the tree

What a suprise for we

Christmas laughter all around

Not a sad face to be found



Santa Clause comes tonight

Cozy Homes closed up tight

Wishing for some snow

The tree's all aglow



Time together

In this weather

This holiday

Time today



Christmas
Reply:It would be better if you did not repeat so many cliches from every Christmas story ever told and came up with something more distinct about Christmas in your own experience.
Reply:it makes me think of Christmas...it is nice
Reply:So very sweet.
Reply:very good 10.9

happy holidays
Reply:That is an awsome poem. I can just picture everything in the poem in my head. It is great!
Reply:Sure!!!!!

Excellent!!!

Perfect are 3 words how i can discribe it. :D